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You see the storm
coming on the horizon.
You're immobile with fear.
The lightning flashes revealing all your flaws.
Their words hurt like claws.
Your beginning to lose hope, and the rain begins to fall.
Dont let them get to you.
They're just jealous and enjoy watching you suffer.
There's always a rainbow at the end of the storm.
You sit in your corner wishing the storm would go away.
The tears begin to fall like a million raindrops.
Your heart is ripping itself apart.
But the thunder only gets louder, the lightning
flashes brighter.
The rain comes pouring down.
Never give up even when everything
seems hopeless.
You cant take anymore
and then you walk into the storm.
You face the wind,
You face the thunder
The lightning
and rain.
A ray of hope penetrates the dark clouds
You see the rainbow and you know everything is going to be alright.
I wrote this a while back so it might be a bit rusty :(
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bialng Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think this is beautiful
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) Ah, it's not rusty at all. But, I admit I've seen the topic before, and it's not set in the most wholly creative way...However, you seemed to pull it off well. ^^
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lIlMirlonlIl Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I really liked is excellent.
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013   Writer
thx! :)
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KitaMikichi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Very nice poem!
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   Writer
thx :)
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
inspiring
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